Comments : B(right) <> D(ark)

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Naazz, love this! You have poetically blended these two entities so wonderfully. I like the message and one of my favorite lines is; "Please don't forget, the real beauty of the fireflies shimmer only in the dark". Well done my friend-

  • 3 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Nice poem

  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    You have a beautiful message here, Nazz.

    • 3 years ago

      by naaz

      Brenda, Stephanie and moss girl thank you for such lovely words.

  • 3 years ago

    by Ren

    "Those who afraid to question doesn't know
    that our evolution is nothing without a spark.
    Please don't forget, the real beauty of the fireflies
    shimmers only in the dark."
    ^^
    These lines...Oh my goodness...love them!

    A beautiful write! Well done!

    • 3 years ago

      by naaz

      Thank you so much, Ren.

    • 2 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      I would agree. Such a strong lines.

  • 3 years ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    I really love this poem and the message it presents. I especially like the last stanza. Definitely a favourite!