Comments : Title Help .. ? ? ?

  • 6 years ago

    by jason

    I like this poem, except for one part but its just stylistic in my view. "You tell me that you love me,
    Then my stupid self believes it.", I would not have added the it, makes it flow a bit better. Still a really good poem :). Also, if I had to make a title for it, I would base it on the last line(as I usually do), so in this case I would just name it regret.