Comments : Limbo

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I like this and can relate to the content and the rhyme (which I love).
    The past can be a terrible foe, simply because it can quite literally hold you as firmly imprisoned as an iron cage.

    Take care and all the best,


  • 3 years ago

    by Ren

    This write hits me emotionally on so many levels right now. I feel you. The betrayal and pain of broken trust can hurt just as badly as a broken heart, if not more. It's hard to move forward and focus on the present moment when those fresh wounds refuse to heal, and continue to break back open. Lost relationships really do test the power of time. I hope you'll find peace and healing through these rough patches, and always remember that you are stronger than you think :)

    Well done on a great write, and take care!