Hi Arsalan :-) The beauty of poetry is that you can make it what you like with regards to structure. I like your reasons for not having an even number of lines, as well as your inspiration for this piece. I don't think there's anything 'wrong' with it (other than a couple of spelling errors) ... and you've done really well to put yourself in the mind of an old man, making his choice about how and when he goes. As for the title ... 'my terms'? 'noose by choice'? 'die hard'? :-) x
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