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by Ben Pickard
A sad piece, but excellently...well, executed!
Take care, Kitty.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Thanks Ben :-) x
by Phoenix ¥
Great poem Kitty - taking the reader in a story with a most definite ending. Really enjoyed it xx
Thanks so much Phoenix! :-) x
Lovely words Kitty, they had me caught in your web. Beautiful write x
Aw, thanks Walter :-) x
by Em (marmite)
What a fantastic piece we'll done kitty
Thanks so much Em :-) x
Kitty, this is an amazing piece of poetry! Loved how it flowed.
I just love your opening stanza so much. It's very clever of you to have chosen it to be the first. Very captivating!
Well done love :) <3
Aw, lovely comments Nee, thank you so much :-) x
Brilliant Miss Kitty, and woven from your poetic skills, albeit a sad piece.
Thank you muchly kind sir :-) x
by C Cattaway
Thanks so much Catherine :-) x
Unfortunately it is all too often that love does feel like a silken trap. This poem certainly captures the idea of feeling betrayed at the promise of a real relationship.
hey thanks Nick, I appreciate your comments :-) x