Comments : Wretched

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I love the first line, Kitty.

    It is full of contempt; spat out with anger, but...

    as the poem continues, it mellows somewhat, simmering down to a moderate realisation that this 'blue' period is just that, a period in time.

    Nice work and good flow throughout.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty,

    yet another great piece of rhyming from you, with a very 'blue' tone all through sadly!
    Much love
    Michael:)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Michael, I'm all good though! :-) x
      =^.^=