A beautifully crafted and delicately written piece, Shane. Well done indeed.

Take care and all the best as ever,

Ben

Shane, beautifully written. Sad but flows so well. Nicely done -

oh Shane ... a little baby sparrow heart wanting love ... this is soooo cute and sad all at the same time! I'm glad it's nominated :-) x
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Shane, this is mind-glowingly good. Great metaphor and use of emotional colours.