Comments : Unknown Species

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like what you have written here. An unknown species who found our perfect world, where violence, hatred and disease do not feature.

    The world as we know it is not perfect, so how did we get here? A great story, like invasion of the body snatchers.

    Take care.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Spooky story this! I really enjoyed it, especially some of the fine rhyming.

    Take care

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oooh but no violence, disease etc etc is this a nightmare or spookier flat earth hahaha