Comments : Creating the other shoe

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Anxiety, a word that creates fear in the bravest of us. There are many ways of dealing with it, but it's a strong emotion that tends to have the upper hand.

    Believing in yourself and congratulating yourself for the small achievements will lead to overcoming the larger fears.

    Keep on keeping on.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I was really intrigued by your title which drew me in. The random layout of the poem really makes the reader feel the anxieties you are facing. Your sentences seem to come out in and long and short breaths as your mind tries to process each thought.

    A little typo perhaps in this line...

    These anxieties wonder what the catch it...should it be is?

  • 5 years ago

    by Thungchio Kithan

    that anxieties created a source of focus on a readers mind to read your poem ...indeed its a good poem