Comments : Fake (short poem)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like the long rhyming spaced lines. The snake metaphor works too, an evilness of words delivered without thought of their consequences.

    This happens all too often, doesn't it?

    Peace.

  • 5 years ago

    by Bleu

    I really enjoyed this poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    The people who think they can lie and cheat are the worse but they always get caught out. A very good rhyming piece.