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  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Love this piece Phoenix.
    the hardship of trudging through and making the best of life.
    Well done and nominated
    Michael :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thank you so much Michael :-) really glad you enjoyed it and understood the essence of my poem.
      Take care xx

    • 7 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      And thank you so much for my first nomination :-)
      Xx

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well written piece of poetry. There's nothing worse than suffering and having to put on a show of happiness at the same time just to protect others.

    Take care

    • 7 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      An insightful comment Ben. I’ve spent a long time protecting others, spot on. Thanks for your comment.
      Take care xx