Comments : The Sun, The moon, The Wind, The Rain

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site, Panda. A well rhymed first post from you.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Letusbeknown

      Thanks Ben.
      Appreciate the feedback

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I liked this a lot. Welcome aboard. :)
    The repeated 1st line is excellent.

    • 7 years ago

      by Letusbeknown

      thank you :).

      First time writing a poem ever. So very happy with feedback

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    certainly looking forward to more poems from you. You have talent!