Comments : Can You See The World

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi.
    I agree, the world is overdue a makeover. The trouble is we are too self-centered to make the necessary changes.

    Well written, rhyming poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Hmm I have to agree recently we are definitely due some renovations within the world there's too much hatred, too much drug and alcohol abuse etc etc etc but hey I cannot complain on that as I've been in the slums of alcohol abuse and left other people to pick up the pieces not caring for the heartache I make unfortunately but luckily I've turned a huge corner or 2 and have made amends to those I need to incase heaven forbid I die tomorrow all we can do is live our own lives trying our best to help out those in need passing on a smile or 2 although sometimes those smiles will go unnoticed but that smile could help some
    Take care

  • 3 years ago

    by chrissy carter

    I too agree. This world is due for some new life. Well written. So very truthful.