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by Mr. Darcy
The frustration is clear in this poem.
I like the format and how it leads to a SHOUTING conclusion. A point well made.
There are a few typos: approval / choice
thank you very much on this feedback, it is well appreciated.
by Ben Pickard
A warm welcome to the site - keep writing,
thank you for the warmest welcome.