Comments : Subjective Reality

  • 7 years ago

    by Darren

    What a clever little poem, glad it was nominated

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      I'm quite happy it managed to sneak into Maple's eyesight^_^ I was pretty proud of this one, kind of just spilled out through my fingers in a passing daydream I had. I appreciate your kind words:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Megan Chapman

    Love this!

    I love those that fall out almost fully formed ... as if "in a passing daydream.." Lovely work.

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thanks!

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm very happy I saw this!!!! love this poem!!!!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      That means a lot to me^_^

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Great all through, but those last two lines are indeed 'haunting'. Fantastic! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    This is indeed very beautiful — perfect portrayal of how in few words, something beautiful is created. Reminds me of Gatsby — a reminder of an old love — your words as beautiful as the ones I felt while watching daisy breathe on screen. But I wonder what has made the poet call this work, "a subjective reality".