I watched the sun
set in my head until it took notice of me, and

^^

I could have picked a few lines, but I chose this! Excellent.

Take care and all the best

Lovely imagery pleased to see this nominated

Congrats!

This is absolutely gorgeous! Congrats on the win!

judges comment

I'm a sucker for a poem that seems like it was written by somebody on the same wavelength as me.
A very thought provoking piece that hurtles then stops then hurtles again. I love the repitition of later to build tension and the imagery and darkness throughout struck a chord with me. I haven't read much of sais stuff but after this gem I shall be reading more. (10 points)