I like the way you've written this poem using a series of smilies. After an argument separation brings with it loneliness and pained reflection.

Thanks for sharing.

Hi Paul,

I really like your piece, which holds so much imagery. Just one thing -
"blanketed and virgin no you in my winter" maybe have another look at this part, as could be a word missing or typo.
But great poem for sure
Michael :)

I love the seasonal imagery and metaphors here Paul and it's different from your usual style. Nicely done! :-) x
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