Comments : Raven & Rose (Portland)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats on the win!

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on the win! A lovely poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Visual magic within this poem-
    Each line is filled with wording that takes you to the Inn/pub that the author is writing of and to me it sounds wonderful and a comfy place I would love to visit. I can see the raven mixing with light and shadow within the corner high beams, and using the word haunt gives it a dark feeling and yet comforting. with the word usage used it takes my thoughts beyond, to smelling of dark wines and incense perhaps. I really enjoy a poem that takes my visual insight above and beyond!
    Stunning visuals, captivating lines from start to finish!