I really like this. ;)

What a brilliant and unique concept. Clever and we'll written and I'm glad to see its nominated Mortal :-) x
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Love the poetic idea, life as your teardrop

A beautiful poem, well deserving its win. Well done,

S

Feelings of being excused or ignored within another person’s heart is what I'm feeling with this beautiful and yet sorrowful poem. I'm really admiring the metaphor of the writer being a teardrop, that was creative, unique and a delight to read. Just wonderful!!

judges comment

This poems imagery is really interesting. From reading it a few times I am pondering, 'who said?'
Love the questions, the urgency and the emotion. Looking deeper points to the prospect of wasting our lives worried too much about what others think. (this is what I take from this) A clever write with many layers. (7 points)