Comments : Mouth-watering (Haiku)

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Michael stood facing
    the emptying clouded sky
    with his tongue out-stretched

    Thank goodness for the rain, eh?

    • 11 months ago

      by Michael

      Mr D also lapped
      up the refreshing raindrops
      watered down at last

      Yes for sure ;)

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, this is wonderful, not least because it wet my appetite too and so this really resounded with me and probably anyone else who lives in Britain!
    The personification of nature and the earth here is wonderfully done. Lovely haiku.

    Take care and all the very best as ever,

    Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Ben, nice comments :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Love this Michael... I read a news article that apparently this heat wave we're currently having is now lasting until November, I surely hope not lol

    • 11 months ago

      by Michael

      Yes Em, and thank you :)x

  • 11 months ago

    by Ren

    Love this, Michael! :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Ren :)X

  • 11 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Michael you nailed it. This heat is draining everybody and everything. If and when there is rain you can watch nature just sucking the water up. Add to my favorite. Hugs to you

    • 11 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x