Comments : To my unborn baby Brooklyn

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh my goodness this is so incredibly sweet!! I'm crying!! How precious!! Congrats :) and this is such a beautiful write!

    • 10 months ago

      by Aka Heisenberg

      Thank you so much for the kind words. I appreciate it.

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This resonates twice over with me: 1) my wife is pregnant also and 2) this is a rhyming poem which I love from a new member. Lovely work.

    All the very best to you and a warm welcome to the site,


  • 10 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    I have a lump in my throat.
    This poem has made me very emotional, and I truly
    love it.

    What a beautiful poem for your new baby on the way. Congratulations
    and welcome to our lovely site!

  • 8 months ago

    by Darren

    judges comment

    Loved the footnote to this, nothing changes perspective more than a child of your own, just wait till you hold her in your arms and look into her eyes. You will become her protector, she will be royalty in your arms and nothing trivial will matter anymore. What a debut write this is, and to give it a form as well. So much love and pride in this piece and I am honoured to give it an HM at least. (4 points)