Comments : Snap. (Out of it)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    To me this read as a terrible reoccurring nightmare... just like post traumatic stress disorder.
    You've really captured the horror and feeling of helplessness.

    Well done.

    • 7 years ago

      by Blank

      Thank you, there are many ways you could take this poem, like the idea of a reoccouring nightmare, which I never thought about.
      The way I wrote it was that this "storm" is a metaphor of all the problems built up around me, keeping me trapped in and lashing back it me.
      It seems when I try to help, they always turn back on me.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dark and disturbing imagery. Well written.

    All the best,

    Ben