Comments : Shine

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent writing, Charlie - well done.

  • 9 months ago

    by Darren

    judges comment

    This poem had me baffled. I read and re-read numerous times. It is massive. A tongue twisting journey that doesn't seem to take you anywhere other than the starting point. I am still confused. Yet I am also intrigued. I am sure that 80% of the words could be removed and we would have a 10 point poem. However that said, I loved reading it, Loved getting lost in it. For that you have my 4 points.