Comments : Fervent

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    A nice Haiku Poemelo.
    The sound of leaves rustling and then calm again.
    The only comment I would say is maybe change one of the 'silences' for another word of the same meaning, so as words aren't repeated.
    But well done
    Michael:)

    • 7 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Michael. I will make some amends as you suggest :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautifully written little haiku which calmed me as I read!

    All the best

    • 7 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      To hear such a comment from you inspire me even more. Thank you Ben :)