Comments : Blinded to the time

  • 5 years ago

    by Catchy

    I love how you described time here. I haven’t written a poem this short and this would be a good example for me. Great work.

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    in the sleepless night
    of smog and scorn

    ^ love this bit, nothing more scornful than trying to get to sleep.
    Nice write.