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This is great, nice imagery and flow.
Gets you thinking and reading again.
however, because I am a bit of a picky sod, I would replace the word 'sight' in line 5, purely because you have already used it in line 3.
You could swap it out for
that being said, this is only a suggestion, it is your poem after all.