Comments : Nocturnal Heart

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This sent shivers down my spine as I read, Paul. Fantastic imagery throughout which actually transported me as I read.

    "Your voice is low almost like mist leaking from the earpeice..."

    ^^

    Great simile, too.

    Take care, Paul

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, the visuals in this Paul are amazing. I felt like as the reader we are all in this room with you, hearing this, seeing the light flashing. Well done-

    • 5 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thanks Brenda I appreciate your comments