Beautiful!
I love winter and your poems too.
Michael, Loved it.

You have quite a masterful control of language! This is no exception. You control your sentences with really well chosen verbs, and assonance.

The imagery is colorful and mesmerizing! Enchanting.

Enchanting is the word! Great win Michael

Just awesome piece!

judges comment
Micheal always has a way of drawing you in when he tells his tales in poetry form.
I loved the first full stanza, the images conjured of her dancing through autumn, converting it into winter. There is a feeling of cold throughout the remainder of the poem through clever word choice.
We are taken on the journey with him, I felt I was gazing out of the same window. 10 points