Comments : Chrysalis

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Nice imagery fella, and I feel hung-over after reading ;)
    an arid piece of writing
    M :)

    • 5 years ago

      by D.

      Haha, I was hungover when I wrote it so I’m glad I could share my experience!

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh the morning after...the regrets of a time ill spent...????

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I thought this had some dead-pan humour to it...the hangover..the thoughts that waken us up to wonder WFT did I do/say last night...I figure we've all done that at some point :)

    Where did you go?
    What did I say?

    I would probably have added...what was your name again? Just to be authentic :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Daniel I wanted to nominate this poem but I missed it. I loved this poem so much. Glad to see it is nominated. Nice flow, well penned.