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  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I really enjoyed this, Victoria. It's well written throughout with some sensual and heartfelt moments by turns. Well done and all the best,
    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by Victoria Ramey

      Thank you so much Ben. I'm glad you enjoyed the turning points and you expressed that you noticed the sensual and heartfelt moments. I didnt want this piece to be too rough or too confusing.