Comments : Everywhere

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Poems that move through the seasons are possibly one of my favourites. I like the imagery they/ you've created. There is a nice use of illiteration in the 'wild with wolves'. I like too, the structure - I find this type of format helps dictate to the reader how it should be read - also, it looks neat too!

    Life is about moving forward toward our personal goals. Moving 2 steps forward and then one back again is common. This poem says much and yet leaves the reader wanting more. I like that in a poem, helping them to think beyond the words.

    Nice work.

    • 7 months ago

      by Hope

      thank you for the comment.