Comments : Despond

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I really like this poem, enough to nominate it although there are a few little errors that I'm sure you can find and edit out. Nicely written once again.

    • 5 years ago

      by Dayo

      I appreciate your comment. However, I'll be grateful if you could help point out errors spotted so I may work on them; it was a spontaneous work.