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by The Poet Behind The Poems
Really enjoyed this piece and it didn't seem at all forced which is wonderful.
The first stranza is my favourite gave me a real image just by the words "city lights.
One bit didn't sound right to me but I think I will put that down to my strong British accent lol
Thought and shot to me didn't read well to me it made me pause,but like I said I believe it's most likely my accent.
by Ben Pickard
Really well rhymed throughout. A pleasure to read.