Comments : All I Know

  • Really enjoyed this piece and it didn't seem at all forced which is wonderful.
    The first stranza is my favourite gave me a real image just by the words "city lights.

    One bit didn't sound right to me but I think I will put that down to my strong British accent lol

    Thought and shot to me didn't read well to me it made me pause,but like I said I believe it's most likely my accent.

    Well penned.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Really well rhymed throughout. A pleasure to read.