Comments : Air

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The use of metaphor throughout this poem is marvellous. A really well done.

    All the best,
    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful piece of writing Tanya, can't say more than that, M :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you, I can't say more than that ;)