Comments : Left Shoe

  • 2 months ago

    by Hellon

    I thought the topic was very original so well done there.

    I felt a sadness as a read through the poem like you were anticipating a change that you were not really happy about but were helpless to stop.

  • 2 months ago

    by Imperfection

    loved it awesome work I wonder if twins feel this way sometimes when things change