Comments : Tired

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi, Tommy
    Memories unlike toys can't be erased. Your poem explores that possibility. It certainly be helpful to pick and choose which ones were useful and just keep them. No wonder the haunting ones make you tired. You may want to amend your typo from 'tried' to 'tired'
    All the best.

    • 6 months ago

      by Tommy

      Thank you all the positive feedback

  • 6 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Its an awful feeling that's overwhelming when you're just tired of EVERYTHING....hope things improve for you soon and you feel better <3

    (Bury the bad and keep the good! Easier said than done I know. ..)

    Well expressed poem.
    All the best and take care <3