Comments : Young love

  • 19 years ago

    by Charlene

    It is very good!

    ~@~

  • 19 years ago

    by Nichole Owens

    That's a really good poem...I rated it a 5. How did you come up with that?-personal experience or just thought of it one day?
    Check mine out-good or bad?
    ©Nichole Owens

  • 19 years ago

    by KerryS

    Very good but also very sad. u nearly had me in tears! Hope it isnt true as i know this would be heartbreaking but if it was tru ur lucky u hav ur daughter as she is a part of him hat you can always have with u! Keep up the good writting!.x x x