You really can write anything. I am not anywhere close to being an expert with sonnets, but this flowed well. And shouldn’t there be a rhyme scheme of some sort?
Anyways, I really love this. Hope to see it nominated :)
Daniel, in absolute honesty, some of the tricky iambic pentameter is off here(most is fine) but your syllable count and rhyming is excellent throughout. Half rhymes are a must in any sonnet in my opinion or things are really in danger of sounding forced, and you make use of them really well.
Anyway, you know I'd love this.