Comments : Humbled by the Universe

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot. There was so much said in these peaceful words. That's how I felt when I read this, at peace. I loved the entire piece but especially the second stanza. Well done -

    • 4 years ago

      by Milo

      Thanks Brenda, I sometimes find it hard to describe what I'm seeing in poetic sense. I wish I can free write everything because I find it easy just to dictate in audio form of what I just saw in my dreams. It's hard at times trying to describe these dreams of how this extraordinary being of light that seems so close to me yet is far away and somehow turning the world with every soft gentle flap of its wings. This being is so magnificent that the only way I could comprehend its beauty is in the form of a bird that's omniscient and translucent in a way. It is also sort of like a hallucination that's not suppose to be real but the experience is real enough to trigger an emotional response.

      Anyway thanks for commenting. I haven't been reading poems lately but I'll definitely read one of yours soon.

  • 4 years ago

    by Truth Bringer

    my dad told me growing up that dreaming is our hearts way of thinking. i am thinking your heart is scared

    • 4 years ago

      by Milo

      Yeah fear is definitely a huge emotional pull.