by Ben Pickard
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Star, this poem is almost a contradiction of its subject, simply because you set a course with this piece and arrived punctually at your destination! Sails flying proudly in the wind, too! Excuse my poor attempts at metaphor, but I really did enjoy this one. |
by Star
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Thank you Ben, I honestly think this poem is weak. :) |
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Absolutely love this. |
by Star
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Thank you ^_^ |
by Michael
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STAR, well done, this is a great piece from you, love the last verse :) M |
by Star
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That you Michael :) |
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I do this too! Great poem! |
by Star
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Thank you :) |