Very sweet and sad at the same time... *sigh*... great poem, keep it up :)

hi ankur...r u frm india????i am...y havent u put ure country age n stuff in ure profile? neways...ure poems lbeautiful....i loved it

Great work.

Beautiful. Keep it up

I really loved this poem. Keep up the good work.

Catherine

wow for ur first poem that was really good...i showed that to my crush and he said good then he asked me out thanks.

wow, thank you guys for your wonderful comments, I greatly appreciate it. Makes me want to write more. I wish I could write happy and lasting love poems, but I can't because its not how I feel. In time though, i might, i just don't know when. But all your wonderful comments keeps my hopes up, so thank you all.

Beautiful poem. when you said one wish you will give to her...Awww so sweet. The poem is so sweet.. Full of emotions in less words. Loved it.

Other people have posted this poem as their own. In searching the web, there are many places it is posted. We have not found any so far that are dated earlier than this one (some don't have dates so it's impossible to tell when it was posted).

If you did not write this poem, I suggest you delete it before we can find proof. Otherwise you will be penalized for plagiary.