Comments : Vers Libre

  • 10 months ago

    by Saerelune

    Great rhythm and I like how you're teasing the reader. I think my biggest enjoyment came from the latter ... How you are kind of saying that not all poetry has to rhyme then you proceed to rhyme throughout the whole poem. Thought it was cheeky in a good way.

    • 10 months ago

      by Koan

      Im so glad that you enjoyed this read!
      I wrote this because I was told many times that a poem has to rhyme... I guess this was a fun way of telling that I can.. lol