Comments : When I Was a Child

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    I just want commend you and give you a hug (I’m sorry it’s coming from a stranger).
    Although the poem is really sad, it’s so beautiful. The way you express things, the beasts the cave, everything!!! I love the repetition, in the child part and the fact that it didnt change as an adult!

    Wish you all the best :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Rania, this is truly beautiful...I'm still absorbing what I just read...