Comments : Blue Eyes Dreaming

  • 1 month ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello eezebard,
    A magnificent declaration of love, at first sight, too, but sadly, just a dream. A wonderful poem overall but especially so, 'With butterflies and rubber thighs my tongue, I swear it swoll'. A complete joy to read. Very well done.

    Kind regards, Tony.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent. Congratulations on the win.