Comments : "To be Alive or To Live?"

  • 3 years ago

    by Shruti

    Aww I love this poem. It's motivating, and it's like a reminder that we can continue living for the small things in life, such as a smile!

    Just one suggestion if you don't mind -
    I think the third line should be "My truest wish" instead of "My most truest wish".

    A smile is one of the most beautiful things in the world. And one day you will definitely smile truly, without hiding any sorrow behind it, and that day will surely come soon! Thank you for sharing this poem. =))

    • 3 years ago

      by Ocean Chant

      Thank you so much for your kind words ^^ and suggestion noted!