This poem is very inspiring I like it a lot, nice work...LiL One

You my friend, will go far.

Lol i like this one the end is funny lil man it should say or i will step on u lol jk :D

I really liked this poem, you are a very goos poet, keep up the good work!

I really liked this poem, you are a very goos poet, keep up the good work!

I have a poem very simular to this youll have to look at it lol it was ok bit expected though i like a surprise in the poems i read :):) (xxx alex xxx)

That poem was soo goodd!! it was inspiring, and it helped to tell people to just go for what they want, and not let other people tell them not too... more people should write these types of poems, like you do.. great job, and keep it up!! 5/5 from mee