Comments : Chances?

  • 3 years ago

    by Violet Raven

    What are the chances of finding someone in the afterlife? I love the title as it asks a very thought provoking question with a deep meaning.

    Will you ever find this person beyond the afterlife? Possibly yes. I believe the first line here is based on hope and sadness. The sadness of missing a person who is now gone but the hope of seeing them again someday in some form or fashion.

    Are they there? This question is haunting in a lot of ways because it draws the line between how we see normalcy and insanity. But i think in the end perhaps only you can answer that. They will always be apart of their heart. They are searching for you but at the same time they are watching over you.

    You loved this person dearly for years so it tells me as the reader it is an older family member that you didn't see much but when you did they made an impact on your life.

    I loved the ending because it asks two great questions will they be rebirthed and if not will you see them again in the afterlife. The love in this poem subtle but so sweet.