Comments : Kansas

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sometimes the best poems are unfinished maybe? They have a less produced feel to them and are far more raw.
    Anyway, the imagery in this is excellent - nerve shredding, even

  • 2 years ago

    by Anthony

    I can literally feel the tension building as I read this. Like singing “here we go round the mulberry bush” but never singing the final line “pop goes the weasel”

  • 2 years ago

    by Rab

    Agg....go an see the Wizard.......he micht guie ye some inspiration