Comments : Journal

  • 1 month ago

    by Daniel

    I had no idea this poem was yours. This poem actually received my vote. I'll copy the comment in I sent to Noura!

    This poem's flow, slant rhyme and cadence are almost flawless. I found the simplicity and lyricism complimented the subject matter, and the final line was crushing. There was something childlike and naïve about it, as a persona is discovering pain for the first time. Well written!

    • 1 month ago

      by Star

      It’s not my style at all, but given the meaning I wanted to convey I thought it would be fitting :)
      Thank you!!!