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lovely, dreamy-awesome visuals
Thank you dear Brenda. :)
by Ben Pickard
Wonderful work, Daniel. Those last three lines are sublime.
I perhaps would change the full stop in the first stanza to a dash or comma as I feel the flow is interupted a little there. Eg,
"...withering above - you are with me". Not sure.
Anyway, great stuff and all the very best,