Comments : Without

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    lovely, dreamy-awesome visuals

    • 4 months ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you dear Brenda. :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderful work, Daniel. Those last three lines are sublime.
    I perhaps would change the full stop in the first stanza to a dash or comma as I feel the flow is interupted a little there. Eg,
    "...withering above - you are with me". Not sure.

    Anyway, great stuff and all the very best,
    Ben